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Im trying to experiment to paint with photoshop 7..

give me constructive comments and also tell me how I can improve such things. Thanks in advance
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PlasmaX7 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2005
Well, first off let me tell you that the idea for this is truly incredible.

Put more effort into the planet.
The walls and oher painted stuff looks like a good basis for TONS of detail that you could add.
Add tiny little details in that part under the arch. That could be a city far away...
Stars? Add them up top. ^.^

I really think this piece has so much potential it is incredible, just never stop adding detail to it, it could become something of pure wonder.
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zelta Featured By Owner Jun 4, 2004
Wow, this is truly wonderful!
I love he colors and the feeling you've attached to it (:
Nice job!
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ShesMyRushMore Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
Beautiful!!! :+fav:
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psyche3000 Featured By Owner May 22, 2004
nice piece but more details needed i suppose...
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pasiphae Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2004
looks nice to me :O i love the dark figure contrasting with the BG. love the colors and composition. but i think you could have put some more detail into the clouds and the rock(?) walls, they look flat when i compare them with the planet in the BG.


but if you gave the planet that "painty" texture you gave to the rest, that'd be nice too. :)
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Coolboy189 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2004
SUPAH :o you get a fav ! How do you do that man ? Real Cool :!:
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whopper Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2004
wow, nice idea dude - i really like this piece, i suggest u try to give it more detail, work on the clouds and improve the texture of the planet ;)
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jason19 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2004
this is beautiful great job:D
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thraxllisylia Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2004  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The lighting is great work,nice composition.i do wish there was a little more work for the character,but i appreciate the effort here anyhoo.
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yosh-dewd Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2004  Hobbyist General Artist
it`s wonderful :o i love it ! i cant see any way how u could improve it :)
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vermilion-0 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2004
How you can improve? Maybe try using real paint, because I don't think you can get much better than where you already are with Photoshop, my friend.
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billybollocks Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2004
I woudl say the experimenting is becoming a great success:) :+fav:
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equuleus Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2004
ohh, interesing, looks good too@
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MissFlesh Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
looks very beautiful, but the edges of the moutain are to burrly to have such dramatic light on it.
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n9261andvari Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Awesome! :clap:
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JeBuZ Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
ooh lovely! very nice colors! :)
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Dr3-3000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
More details as :tigaer: said and maybe change the moon's colour to something whiter to make it more realistic. Also - unless you intended to make the figure look like a midget - the proportion could be improved. Finally put more textures on the tree. Contraty to what I said, this is a beautiful compostion.
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tigaer Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004  Professional Digital Artist
even if i miss a bit more detail on the rock-walls... i like the look of this piece :) :+fav:
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marvnation Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
i think you did a really good job, looks mad
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zilla774 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004  Professional Interface Designer
wow, nice work d00d. great colours and composition. the feel is great. :clap:
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clev Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Nice work! Cliffs maybe need a bit of texture diversity but thats its. Great job on this.
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evan333 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
nice. :thumbsup:
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lord-zany Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Better than i can do O_o

I wish i could give you constructive criticism, but i dont know how i could help.

Oh

Practice makes perfect. :-)
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avireX Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004  Hobbyist Photographer
woohoo its great nice work
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julieanshar Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Overall I like this image very much, and the "Star Wars" feel is pretty cool. The moon and the dusty clouds are perfect, but the rock structures need some work. Compared to the other sections, the rocks look a bit slapdash and unfinished, and I know that's not your style. Unfortunately, I don't know very much about how to paint in photoshop either, so I'm afraid I can't give you technical advice on how to improve. All I can say is to keep experimenting, and hopefully someone else will come along who can help you better.
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omegadragon3000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Simple, yet manages to capture an excellent scene! ^^
Looks great!
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passenger-nq Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
well i wouldn't know how to improve it. it's some great piece of work
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siebenzehn Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
great work, dig the colors :)
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Resident-seven Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
I love this picture, the only thing is, the top left side looks a little plane, maybe a small hole through the rocks.
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chaos-syndrome Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Reminds me of Obi-Wan Kenobi in some way... or is it the Jawas?

Nice composition.
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deadbinky Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
I think it would look wrong without the figure in the picture, still nice, but missing something. I think it's perfect as it is :)
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insignifigance Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
Really nice... the only thing I see... is the figure looks disproportional... this may have been what you were going for... but he/she doesn't seem to fit.
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RaDaN02000 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
definitly, agrreed on the composition. Practice is all I really have to say with painting. . . getting to understand the light. I really like the cloud like stuff in the background :) looks sweet
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tripleplay369 Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2004
cool composition bro
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